tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4905646156155063336.post4332640956042467327..comments2023-03-30T09:59:37.084-06:00Comments on a failed millennial: One of Those DaysDaniellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00841687726160919504noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4905646156155063336.post-61158802598617667482012-06-14T17:54:00.842-06:002012-06-14T17:54:00.842-06:00I don't know much about poetry, but that was r...I don't know much about poetry, but that was really pretty. Nicely done!Amyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17690332249339782027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4905646156155063336.post-69954665150756297732012-06-14T15:21:15.942-06:002012-06-14T15:21:15.942-06:00This is beautiful, holy moly. I like this, a lot! ...This is beautiful, holy moly. I like this, a lot! And ditto, too.Balienoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4905646156155063336.post-62781862818287401802012-06-14T09:27:54.906-06:002012-06-14T09:27:54.906-06:00I love it! It really sums up those feelings of hop...I love it! It really sums up those feelings of hopeless frustration, and then release. I think this is something all writers can relate too. Ditto on Bob's comment, that was my favorite part of the poem.Celiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17902007828586547165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4905646156155063336.post-14790609462886501832012-06-14T05:06:03.332-06:002012-06-14T05:06:03.332-06:00I like to think the stories fly out when I run,
l...I like to think the stories fly out when I run, <br />landing in sparrows' ears <br />who later turn them into simple yet beautiful <br />songs outside peoples' bedroom windows.<br /><br />Terrific imagery!!!!Bob Josjorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10707851274610699372noreply@blogger.com